Here are some examples of opening lines that will make her forget about all those other guys, and start focusing on you. Everyone loves to travel on dating sites and apps, but no one wants to read “I love to travel” for the millionth time.
But with an opening line like “Windsurfing in Aruba”, she knows you’re not just another boring homebody.
So, lets look at a few typical examples of bad profiles: “I am not good at writing about myself, but my friends say that I am intelligent, professional, educated and ambitious. I am looking to a meet an intelligent, beautiful woman for dating and relationship.” – at first, this looks like a well-written profile by a guy who seems to have head on his shoulders. There is nothing “catchy” about this profile – there is nothing that would compel a reader to stop and respond to it.
However, it has one major flaw that will make many women skip over it. Lets look at another bad profile: “I went to school in the east coast, but now I work for a major software company where I work up the corporate ladder. I love hiking, watching baseball, and bbq on weekends.” – the writer must be reminded that this is a dating profile – not a resume or a sales presentation in front of his human resources department. as a rule, you should never start your profile by talking about school or work, as it’s not interesting and not really relevant to what you should be trying to achieve – to catch a woman’s attention.” “I love to have fun, party, dance, and drink of my buddies.
If you wanna hang out sometimes, holler at me…” – unless you are in a fraternity, you should never come across as someone who has nothing else to him but getting drunk and leading a lifestyle devoid of any real goals or ambition.
Now, lets look at an example of a profile that will stand out through both the way they are written and their content.
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Your competition is busy writing crap like this:“Working out, having fun and enjoying life! Boring does not trigger the emotional response you need to capture her attention.“Have fun and enjoy life” is too vague for her to imagine, and she’s not going to bother picturing herself on the treadmill next to you at the gym. But with our compelling opening lines, she’s reading every last word.
That’s why we spend so much time staring at an incomplete bio box, hoping inspiration will strike soon! It’s great to have you here 🙂Remember, your first line is CRUCIAL.
Not only do you have to grab her attention hard, you have to make her want to keep reading.
The competition’s so fierce that the first sentence can literally make or break your chances of meeting a great girl. Don’t worry, you’ll be covered by the time you finish reading this post…Think about your profile as a commercial – you’re about to unleash the inner Don Draper you never knew you had.
Commercials have to command your attention from the very first moment, otherwise you’ll fast forward them or go grab a snack, right? The very first line of your profile has one mission: Make her feel something.